Novel Criticism

hollowsaber Guest	Post by hollowsaber on Aug 13, 2012 21:24:01 GMT -6 Want to say something about my story? Have any ideas or thoughts on it? Find a problem? Please, post below. I'm all for the help! The Novel is here.

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David • Guardian Posts: 2,313 Likes: 507	Post by David on Aug 15, 2012 13:59:33 GMT -6 So far, the story flows well, no gaps. I like it a lot. Good reading.

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halo001 Guest	Post by halo001 on Aug 15, 2012 15:22:24 GMT -6 I have found a few spelling, punctuation, and capitalization errors as well as you posted a word twice in a row in the prologue. Other than that, it's great so far, a good storyline. Looking forward to when this is finished.

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hollowsaber Guest	Post by hollowsaber on Aug 15, 2012 15:52:38 GMT -6 Where was this double-word at, if you wouldn't mind point it out.

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halo001 Guest	Post by halo001 on Aug 15, 2012 22:36:28 GMT -6 It seems you have already gotten rid of it.... I reread the whole thing and couldn't find it, so.....

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hollowsaber Guest	Post by hollowsaber on Aug 15, 2012 23:20:14 GMT -6 O.o... That's weird.. I didn't edit it at all..

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halo001 Guest	Post by halo001 on Aug 15, 2012 23:22:52 GMT -6 But the thing says the last edit was by you earlier today....

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hollowsaber Guest	Post by hollowsaber on Aug 15, 2012 23:28:29 GMT -6 ...I didn't edit it. Magic?

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halo001 Guest	Post by halo001 on Aug 15, 2012 23:59:16 GMT -6 IDK, but you said to to somewhere and it made no sense, but now it's gone.

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Jakob: My choice of username as a teenager is unfortunate since I transitioned last year lmao but I think I'm over a decade too late to change it now!

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Llau: For the RP side. Sure, you can have characters discuss about the in-game religions and politics. Just don't get too serious about either one.

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Llau: You're confusing OOC discussion with OC, Death Penalty. No Religion - as in, don't get into religious discussions (ie: religious person vs atheist, etc) with another member.